Poetic Pros

Vodo

28-05-2007 01:08:57

Drawing on the Krath Heritage of House Ektrosis, write a poem describing the preparation for war. Describe the feelings of anxiety and uncertainty before an unknown enemy. Submissions will be graded based on flow and feel. The poems may be in any form, and length is not a deciding factor.

The entries will be judged by Vodo, Joshman, and the house summit. Entries due Monday the 11 of June. First place will recieve 15 points, second 13 poins, and third 10 points.

SEND ENTRIES TO THE HOUSE SUMMIT, VODO, AND JOSHMAN

Vardar

28-05-2007 06:12:38

The morning sun was pale
As were many of the men
Terror they fought, but to no avail
Until arrived were Shadow and Ben.

The men rose up in deepest repect
And knew the fight would go beyond dusk
When Shadow, tendons pulsing in his neck
Unto them proclaimed "In Darkness we thrust!"

Whilst loading up various ammunitions
Manned were the battle positions
And all men awaited their missions.

The mood swinged at a regular pace
No one could keep still in his place
As an unkowned enemy stared at them...face to face.

To battle!

Lokasena

28-05-2007 15:42:16

I sent my poem to you by mail.
submitted for your aproval.

Vodo

29-05-2007 00:07:07

my fault, I meant to say you must send these to the House Summit, Joshman and Vodo. I have these saved already, so if you could edit your post to clear the poems out, I would be greatly thankful.

Avenged

30-05-2007 14:53:41

Sent mine in hope you like it short and sweet.

JH Avenged 7738

Lauria Ballard

01-06-2007 00:06:34

I sent my submission as well, in a word file attached to the e-mail. I hope that form of submission is alright