Troutrooper
27-04-2013 00:25:44
Due to the sensitive nature of this contract, this entry has been submitted via email.
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Marick
07-05-2013 17:46:56
Contract 007: Complete
Mission: Accomplished
Debriefing: While he was not successful in fully infiltrated Plageus, Troutrooper was able to find the information requested, as well as earned his brief vacation.
Comments::
This mission was not straight forward. It's hard to come up with a challenge for a Dark Jedi Master, let alone one of the Brotherhoods best writers. I tried to think of something that would give you enough obstacles to overcome and create something that was not only great, but enjoyable as well.
You did the task of working with the variables put in front of you, and spun it into gold. I really enjoyed reading the story. I was attentive to every word of dialogue that was spoken. It was well written, well paced, and easy to immerse myself. The characters are all portrayed realistically and not overly characterized. Most importantly, I laughed at certain moments, "ahah!" when i was appropriate as if I was watching a great movie in the cinema.
The technical writing was near perfect, and I found no flaws that I can earnestly point out without nitpicking unnecessarily.
Sadly, I don't think that certain members would be able to take the use of their characters in a negative light, even in the case of a non-canon fiction that was designed to be fun, which is why the contract is being kept private for this case.
It was simply, overall, a great piece of fiction. For this, it earns the elusive "Superior" grade. Nice work, Trouty.
Grade:
S-Class = 4 points;
"Superior" Contract = 4 points;
Total = 8 points.