Shadonyx
05-06-2005 21:39:55
http://www.krath.org/writing/Hellraiser.htm
I'm a pretty big fan of the
Hellraiser series of movies, so I decided to write a short story integrating that with the DJB. I think I did a good job importing Pinhead into the SW mythos, although I do admit I "borrowed" a couple conventions from the movies (most notably
Bloodline). Feel free to leave any comments or questions.
Shadonyx
05-06-2005 22:18:03
Octavian
05-06-2005 23:46:07
Hey Shad,
Wanted to thank you for writing this short story. It is great so far. If you were looking to be a horror or scary story well the pictures frightened the hell out of me friend. I enjoyed your well written transitions as well as brevity and terse diologue and diction that kept the story from being long winded. That being said a bit more description could be used. Keep up the good work buddy.
KP Octa
Anonymous
18-07-2005 23:57:28
Love it.
Who would have thought The Cenobites could be slipped so seamlessly into the SW universe.