Path of the Force
A fiction created by DJK Lucien Triadus Isradia and KP Esca Teiko Isradia. Enjoy.
~Esca~
Octavian
05-06-2005 23:54:24
Hey buddy,
Solid story man. I honestly enjoyed your diologue and felt it was better than most. Seriously every writer here is better than me I must say and you are no exception. I liked the whole comradery aspect of the story and the master-apprentice angle of the plot. The self-reflections and pondering was also a good flair for the story. Im envious of your skills.
KP Octa
Macron Sadow
15-06-2005 22:37:33
Well written. Nice detail.....