The Lion of Tarthos
This story was done as a character development piece, set shortly after the end of the KRoS. It pretty much explains how Muz came to the point where he felt worthy of his family's name again. It's a more or less serious piece, and has a lot of the central figures of CNS (specifically in HMR at the time) in it.
Yup nice writing. Fun to read.
This was a rather lengthy write and throughout you kept it a good piece. Characters were three dimesional and their reactions, words, and actions seemed to be in character and make sense very well. Transitions were decent as well, liked how you segmented it to a degree. It was a slightly longer read and you could have condensed a bit but that is just me nit-picking.
thanks for the feedback, everyone!