Seti I Shadim
14-03-2007 04:53:13
Voodoo Machinegun in Dminor.
New trail of tears,
mark minaret skies
with chemical lines-
child’s face
married to death,
dust, sand
at roadside
New Cherokees
old world
worn & cracked blankets-
Grand Old Republic of Fever-
Technologically precise
Alchemies.
Sometimes childern wake up
wrapped in televised screams.
There are no more
sweet shotgun nostalgias-
no Mom
no apple pie
unless Mom is found
to be
baked inside
the delicately
flaky crust
like some black
& white
creature feature
1957
cannibal surprise.
Here we bleed real, like
Norman Rockwell on a cross.
Throw out
your plastic dashboard
Jesus.
Man,That god
won’t work here
Light the candle.
Howl Kaddish.
Run like hell.
Cold African water.
Starving
hands grow up
like grass
as green
as cash-
or yellow
dandelions
in the front yard,
flowers with chalked
outline
of brown dinge -
roots run deep,
It doesn’t matter
whether hands
are at your plate,
or weeds weave themselves
at your door.
War your meat real.
Tear cellophane away
& feel
iced old
chicken blood
drizzle down
wrists.
This sings ancient-
This drums
the father’s…
mother’s
faith…
Electric nox.
Look deep
with dirty hands-
reds, browns,
green.
Keep your meat real-
“Welcome to Karbala.and
keep your head down.
-Seti I Shadim
Seti I Shadim
14-03-2007 04:55:08
Fragments of a Dark Jedi
There are those who see us as evil
draped in shadows & night veils.
I cannot recognize their empty faces.
There are those who see us as good
a dark mirage that phoenixes into angelic light.
I cannot translate or understand their dead tongue.
Both are names without being.
But I walk along this ocean shore
whose tides have turned to bright blood waves
I am lost here and my soul is married to this new fire.
My heart incenses love’s wakefulness
as my breath is a war dirge
born between stars.
All laws of God & man are broken potter’s shards at my feet.
And I take my first gulp of pure cold air.
Gazing upon the ocean foam & ancient crags
I know I am not alone……I never have been.
How many others, I wonder, have broken bread
with this same moment?
How many oceans have we all seen like this?
How many ….like this?
At last, I grasp my sword in hand
& begin the journey to where
I remember the rumors
of the ancient war.
- Seti I Shadim
Seti I Shadim
14-03-2007 04:57:13
Black Water
Black water.
Suddenly humane
war-machines overhead,
carnivore camera eyes
devouring this slow sick feast-
Come join the beast asylum
swim if you can,
up from Cerberus' jaws
into a fat dead dawn.
Today I tell you
Darwin was God.
Black water
frames flare film fire
devastation footage
darkness you can taste
liquid nightmares
straight from the CNN vine.
Mother Nature's finest
rot hangs like sky:
this is what
Ivory Tower minstrels call:
natural evil.
Black water
Flowing into naught
flowing into nox
going nowhere at all
warning signal given
on everyone's favorite channel
like a Ramadan call at sunset.
But many left their minds at Sunday's door
& quickly forgot
that Gods suffer not fools.
Whirling dancing deadly
Kali's garland of skulls.
And when grey & black of sky
wraps this city in taut knots,
Pray if you have not before.
Pray quiet litanies to She, whose
blood tongue unrolled as if dream.
Pray, muttering
your cool invocations
to our Darkest Mother.
Seti I Shadim
14-03-2007 04:58:51
Lucyflower
How strange to explain
maleficent angels
screeching across
Atlantis Monday.
There are no pictures
of pretty Spanish Moss
or quaint white dead rows
for me to send now.
A canopy painted
slime cathedral green
even the dry dead bones
are drowned tonight.
A conference of flies
along the broken Canal,
amidst drifting flowers
from Lucifer's Bedlam.
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Ylith Pandemonium
14-03-2007 07:32:40
This counts for 2 pages, you will need 8 more pages and do 2 reviews on other stories to
qualify for a Dark Side Scroll.
Ylith
**Note: When reviews are made, posts links on this thread. If you submit new material,
be sure to link and mention this to add in post count.**
(with poems I count half the total page length, to compensate towards full written stories, also, you had a lot of blank lines, which also took away half a page.)
Seti I Shadim
24-03-2007 07:43:49
The Code of a Dark Jedi
I am the walker between worlds
born of light & shadow
I embrace the All.
I hunt the Great Mystery.
I am known by names innumerable:
Jedi, Krath,Fallen, Heretic.
I am the child of love & hate
cruelty & compassion.
I do not hunger for power
nor am I a selfless servant.
My code is honor and knowledge
My way is not balance.
I am a stalker of knowledge
for the sake of knowledge alone.
I am a Dark Jedi
seeking the ancient sophia
to drink the elixir, the dark ambrosia
from the fount of the sanguine Gods.
- Seti I Shadim
Seti I Shadim
15-04-2007 00:59:13
Stained Hands
Twisted cartoon
in a pool of doubt,
young grunt soldiers
carried out,
from the Grand Vizier’s
private stables-
run if you are able,
eyes bleeding,
& souls beveled,
leveled up to the dust-
rust & photos
of freedom’s days,
the little ways, we lost,
serenity,
poor girl,
never saw it coming-
let us be-bop
to the cathedral,
we’ll try to remember when,
over gin & cards,
we laugh back to school days,
& pray for rain,
to wash,
Capote blood,
wash it all
from our
stained hands.
-Seti I Shadim