Origins of Ma`ar

http://www.krath.org/writing/Origins_of_the_Ma_ar.htm

Feel free to tear this apart....my first submission for the writers corner >:)

I've read it and it's a very nice story, can't wait for part two

Good work!

Ylith

Awesome story Ma'ar!

I really enjoyed how you also added the perspective of the characters and what we would feel to be them.

Great!

no ripping needed here!