I like the lighthearted elements. Well done!
thanks I appreciate it ^^
very very good...good work...
personaly i like everything...but what i favour mostli is the realistic writing of the attitude of a Dark Jed in battle...it looks complex at first but its readeble even for a child...
I'll keep postin story's here though, so keep checking
hehe i love this story
i really should post my one. Oh well
Excellent story bro!