Obelisk RoS Story Submission

Ylith Pandemonium

26-09-2005 11:58:37

Hey all,

This is what I have submitted for the Obelisk Rite of Supremacy.
I hope you'll enjoy!



Macron Sadow

26-09-2005 13:19:36

I like the lighthearted elements. Well done!

Ylith Pandemonium

26-09-2005 16:10:43

thanks I appreciate it ^^


27-09-2005 18:29:13

very very good...good work...
personaly i like everything...but what i favour mostli is the realistic writing of the attitude of a Dark Jed in battle...it looks complex at first but its readeble even for a child...

exeptional work :D

Ylith Pandemonium

03-10-2005 17:20:24

thanks :) I'll keep postin story's here though, so keep checking ;)



21-11-2005 06:42:08

hehe i love this story ;)

i really should post my one. Oh well

Excellent story bro!