Obelisk RoS Story Submission

Hey all,

This is what I have submitted for the Obelisk Rite of Supremacy.
I hope you'll enjoy!

Ylith

http://www.krath.org/writing/The_War_of_Tarentum.htm

I like the lighthearted elements. Well done!

thanks I appreciate it ^^

very very good...good work...
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personaly i like everything...but what i favour mostli is the realistic writing of the attitude of a Dark Jed in battle...it looks complex at first but its readeble even for a child...

exeptional work

thanks I'll keep postin story's here though, so keep checking

Ylith

hehe i love this story

i really should post my one. Oh well

Excellent story bro!