Your style of writing is very interesting. I have one question though: Was this story supposed to be symbolic in some sort of way?
Thsi was not symbolic exactly, rather for people to thing what they will
and maybe make their own inferences into the whole theme.
I glad you like my style, I feel it keeps the pace going to the piece.
Sounds like my sleeping schedule.
A nice read, very refreshing. I could tell about five sentences ahead that he would wake after the day was through, which tells me good foreshadowing.