RevengeX
27-07-2005 10:10:19
Your style of writing is very interesting. I have one question though: Was this story supposed to be symbolic in some sort of way?
Jagan Roda
30-07-2005 15:08:16
Thsi was not symbolic exactly, rather for people to thing what they will
and maybe make their own inferences into the whole theme.
I glad you like my style, I feel it keeps the pace going to the piece.
BriGuy
03-08-2005 02:42:27
Sounds like my sleeping schedule.
A nice read, very refreshing. I could tell about five sentences ahead that he would wake after the day was through, which tells me good foreshadowing.