The Discovery of the Forbidden fruit (non SW)

Ylith Pandemonium

12-07-2005 07:02:15

Hello all,

Since it's my first post here I'll introduce myself first.
My nam is Ylith, I am new on the Dark Brotherhood and proud
to be part of it.

although this is not a Star Wars based story I hop you'll enjoy it
as much as I enjoyed writing it.
It's somekind of modern fantasy based upon a bible story.
I hope you'll enjoy.

To read it please click on this link or copy it onto your browser:

Please enjoy and let me know what you think.

Dark greetings,



23-07-2005 12:10:50

great story man! i enjoyed it


23-07-2005 13:28:57

pretty sweet if you ask me...

Ylith Pandemonium

28-07-2005 04:55:28

thanks guys :)