Thorin Derev Oakenshield


21-06-2005 23:43:36

I'm not much of a writer, but I made this up, and someone suggested I put it here, so here it is :P

Feel free to critique!


Known Errors

The use of commas in "space in a modified TIE Advanced, the ISD Relentless, of the TIE Corps Battlegroup"

and Commendation of Loyalty should be Commendation of Excellence


22-06-2005 07:19:00

The Hobbit'D

*Goes off to read your history*

Macron Sadow

22-06-2005 08:32:28

You posted it! yuayy!