Anonymous
21-06-2005 23:43:36
I'm not much of a writer, but I made this up, and someone suggested I put it here, so here it is 
Feel free to critique!
http://www.krath.org/writing/Thorin.htm
*EDIT*
Known Errors
The use of commas in "space in a modified TIE Advanced, the ISD Relentless, of the TIE Corps Battlegroup"
and Commendation of Loyalty should be Commendation of Excellence
Feel free to critique!
http://www.krath.org/writing/Thorin.htm
*EDIT*
Known Errors
The use of commas in "space in a modified TIE Advanced, the ISD Relentless, of the TIE Corps Battlegroup"
and Commendation of Loyalty should be Commendation of Excellence