Yavin Four Artifact Run

Macron Sadow

13-06-2005 02:42:23

And here you go, my bit of character development on Yavin Four in search of artifacts for Nekura Manji Keibatsu:

www.krath.org/writing/Artifact_Run.htm

Comments are appreciated.
Thanks, Macron Goura

Keshik

15-06-2005 01:12:59

wow man, that's awesome. I think you should write a sequel.
Like, maybe the Jedi caught up with him in space or something of equal catastrophic proportions. Maybe his master attacks him when he returns to the SA, because one of the Padawans Macron killed was his son?
I dunno, something like that would be nice.

Macron Sadow

15-06-2005 08:24:51

Hmm. That is an interesting thought. Thanks!

silverRaven

15-06-2005 15:42:25

that was my task! how dare you!