Ronovi
20-06-2009 03:21:39
In this thread, anyone who has any suggestions, feedback, or comments for the Cestus run-on can put them here. I think that's pretty straight-forward, so here we go.
Like I said in the first post, we are all starting from the starport. Keep in mind, some major events I've already mentioned will happen, including the freighter explosion. That won't be avoided. It's up to you guys to carry the story and fill in the gaps between. And those gaps are big, might I add.
I hope the first post looks good and will work well for an intro.
Ronovi
21-06-2009 11:43:23
...Okay. Is something wrong, Huld? :S
I'm sorry I couldn't help it. I wanted to post in the RO but won't have time until Monday night so I vented my frustration in the form of poop.
Ronovi
21-06-2009 14:20:41
We'll see what happens. No one's really taken the initiative yet.
Well if nothing happens by tomorrow evening I'll snag the first non-starter post.
Windos
22-06-2009 03:07:15
Lies! Huld will (can) do no such thing!!!!!!11oneeleven
Ronovi
22-06-2009 03:16:05
Well, I don't see you jumping for it, Windos.
Ronovi
22-06-2009 14:16:39
Also, I added a time limit for post reservation. Sorry for not doing that earlier.
Ronovi
22-06-2009 18:35:10
I like what you did with the BlasTech place, Windos. At least someone's looking at the map I have on the wiki page, too.
Ronovi
23-06-2009 03:11:45
Update! A wiki page on Eduardo Griffin, governor of Yridia IX, has been posted.
Sith Bloodfyre
23-06-2009 16:48:27
"Eduardo Griffin"? Really? Sounds like something right out of Family Guy. Is he a long-lost relative who was a Colombian druglord that looks surprisingly like Peter, with the same genitalia-esque chin?
Ronovi
23-06-2009 17:01:41
You know, I actually find Griffin to be a very cool name, be it a first or last name. I don't watch Family Guy and Seth McFarlane should be ashamed for giving an awesome name to a complete moron.
Kazarelth
25-06-2009 08:21:47
Oscar Munroe is Shardara's RL pet cat's name. Windos hates that cat and decides to put it in the RO
Ronovi
25-06-2009 14:15:26
Why don't you put yourself in the RO? Hmmm?
Windos
25-06-2009 17:57:33
Asctually, the cats name is Oscar King, Shards RL last name is Munro (no e
)
Teach you Kaz!
Kazarelth
26-06-2009 00:04:26
Oscar King?! He's your cat, Josh?
Windos
26-06-2009 00:21:57
Of course, I love that little bugger
Ronovi
26-06-2009 00:56:25
Kaz, few things I noticed about your post:
1. You claim that the guard is dead and has become a "bloodstain." That didn't happen; according to Doni's post, the last we saw him was when he was screaming in agony because his eyes had been removed. And as far as I'm concerned, missing eyes does not always constitute death.
2. You make the council and governor show surprise when Rend says, "She belongs to Eden City." Ronovi had already said, in my post, that she was from Eden to the governor.
Windos
26-06-2009 01:34:04
Ronovi, perhaps the chap was removed from the room with his eyes and the blood on the desk had not yet been cleaned up?
That's how I read it anyway.
Ronovi
26-06-2009 01:37:55
Kaz's post says, "Deceased comrade." Plus, it implies that the bloodstain is what the guard used to be.
Either way, it's a continuity error I'd like to see fixed, along with the other point I made.
Kazarelth
26-06-2009 05:01:44
All done. Thanks for the alert!
Ronovi
26-06-2009 20:59:47
Just so I don't cause any controversy, I will be editing any posts for mechanical errors alone should you see "Edited by Tavisaen." For example, Vai, there were some technical mishaps in your post, so I fixed them a bit. I did not alter the content, just the mechanics.
Windos
27-06-2009 22:25:05
Yay for drug induced precognition!
Ronovi
02-07-2009 18:53:11
As I said in the e-mail, the RO has extended to July 12th. Have fun with writing your part in the aftermath, guys!