The Order of the Chiros

Wrath

11-07-2005 18:53:19

Chiros


Note: It has been acknowledged that some parts of this have been used in an exam, most is my history and extra additions though.

This is sort of my history extended to my death, im going to write more later; develop the paraphrased beginning...



Suggestions.. critique...

Tuskani

12-07-2005 06:02:16

How many of these are you planning on doing?

Wrath

12-07-2005 18:41:13

oh just one, though i am going to keep adding, i daresay it will end up like a small book

Tyrus

12-07-2005 20:40:25

very nice, i daresay i would like to see more of this...

Tuskani

13-07-2005 07:33:59

Always a one for writing books you are

Wrath

13-07-2005 09:30:49

There are parts which really need rewriten, and a lot added too a lot of the time there are too many ideas in one paragraph...